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Postby ramy_ramroum » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:52 am

hii !! this is another project of a residence
i finished it yesterday , each render took 1 hour with a little PP
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Re: residence

Postby ramy_ramroum » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:53 am

another shots
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Re: residence

Postby faluchdeviaro » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:58 am

Very good design and very good renders, and very good time, only 1 hour per image.
Can we see the images without pospro?
I like the last one very much.
Can we see a night one?
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Re: residence

Postby Fletch » Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:28 am

Agree 100% with faluchdeviaro.
The sky seems maybe a little too saturated, but that's a personal opinion.
And the trees on the right in Final2 and Final4 seem too dark compared to the lighting/environment.
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Re: residence

Postby JeZ » Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:01 pm

Fletch wrote:The sky seems maybe a little too saturated, but that's a personal opinion.


My opinion is: Everything must feel better near the Mediterranean sea. :evil: :lol:

Ramy, all your last images are very effective/readable. Good work!
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Re: residence

Postby ramy_ramroum » Thu Mar 24, 2011 4:14 pm

yes im from tunisia JEZ
@ fletch: thx for your tuto for the spherical sky !! i used it and im satisfied with the result
@ faluchdeviaro the only PP that i did is a contrast of the colour,, everything is from sketchup ( plants , sky ...)
and if i have a time ill do a night shot for the last :)
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Re: residence

Postby marvins_dad » Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:30 pm

Nice Design!
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Re: residence

Postby Fletch » Thu Apr 14, 2011 7:54 pm

Ramy, this image would be better if it did not cut off the top of the building, and if you straightened the vertical lines in post pro.
like this... (I can fix the verticals, but I can't fix the top of the building)

Also, the curving face in one image looks segmented- place the curving face inside of a group or component and it will render smooth/correctly.
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Re: residence

Postby bing1370 » Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:09 am

:gj:

if the tl support 2 point perspective try to render them in 2PP with eye level it will look great and nice...

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