Pool Lantern

Show what you're working on, get feedback and help
Post Reply
southridgerender
Posts: 3
Joined: Fri Apr 14, 2017 3:40 pm

Pool Lantern

Post by southridgerender » Fri Mar 02, 2018 1:07 am

I did a fair number of backyards and pools last year. Played with my creative side when doing this one. Thoughts and suggestions are welcome. First time posting so please be gentle. Not entirely happy with the repetition of the wood texture in some areas. Seeing the same part and pattern of a texture repeated takes away from the organic-ness of the image.
Attachments
69329350-D121-469F-B9C6-3EBDDA820E8A.jpeg
69329350-D121-469F-B9C6-3EBDDA820E8A.jpeg (1.21 MiB) Viewed 785 times

Mike1158
Posts: 635
Joined: Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:15 pm

Re: Pool Lantern

Post by Mike1158 » Fri Mar 02, 2018 11:43 am

Overall a cracking render, the wood I agree with but you would have to look for it. Is that ripples I see on the pond? I cannot see anything that would cause ripples there. :clap:

RTD Laboratories
Posts: 121
Joined: Sat Oct 14, 2017 10:37 am
OS: Windows
SketchUp: 2017
Location: Sweden

Re: Pool Lantern

Post by RTD Laboratories » Fri Mar 02, 2018 11:48 am

Looking good there, one thing you could try is to make the ripples thinner. Other than that, good job :^:
Andrew F

posodrac
Posts: 237
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:43 pm
OS: i5 7th 16Gb W10
SketchUp: SU 17 Make
Location: Portugal

Re: Pool Lantern

Post by posodrac » Fri Mar 02, 2018 12:31 pm

People... it's a floating lamp! Dhaa.
What most catch my eye is the long extention jpg file name. :welcome: :gj:
This will look good in my "curriculum vitae": "Heterodox truck driver at TNT/FedEx"

nickario
Posts: 158
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2011 10:03 am
OS: win10 64bit
SketchUp: 2018
Location: Stockholm,Sweden

Re: Pool Lantern

Post by nickario » Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:24 pm

:gj: :welcome:

southridgerender
Posts: 3
Joined: Fri Apr 14, 2017 3:40 pm

Re: Pool Lantern

Post by southridgerender » Sat Mar 03, 2018 2:15 am

Thanks all. I agree that the ripples could be smaller. Appreciate the kind word and the positive criticisms. Always looking to improve!

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests