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adamjessome
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Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by adamjessome » Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:09 pm

I found a photo of a forest cottage online and decided to try and reproduce it. Criticism is encouraged.
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Mike1158
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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by Mike1158 » Fri Jul 27, 2018 9:56 pm

I think you posted the photo, :lol: . I like the slight reduction in contrast which gives a hint of watercolour. Others may be able to find fault as they have better critique skills, me, I just love it. :rspkt: :^:

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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by Chris » Fri Jul 27, 2018 10:05 pm

:^: I agree with Mike's comments about the watercolor.

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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by posodrac » Sat Jul 28, 2018 1:27 pm

This is a Pro shot render :rspkt:
I like the DOF of the top of the trees with the sky, the gravel work and the shed/house in harmony with environment.
I could argue about the bark of the trees, too white for me. The sunny side is too washed away and also some leaves (the ones reflecting on the window) seem to large. Some boulders could get into the ground more.
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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by adamjessome » Sun Jul 29, 2018 2:03 am

posodrac wrote: Sat Jul 28, 2018 1:27 pm This is a Pro shot render :rspkt:
I like the DOF of the top of the trees with the sky, the gravel work and the shed/house in harmony with environment.
I could argue about the bark of the trees, too white for me. The sunny side is too washed away and also some leaves (the ones reflecting on the window) seem to large. Some boulders could get into the ground more.
:welcome:
thanks for the tip. SInking the boulders into the ground is a great improvement. And I found some better birch trees.

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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by RTD Laboratories » Sun Jul 29, 2018 10:16 pm

Whoa! :shock: This one had me scratching my head fo a while, if it wasn't for the mis-alligned texture on the birch tree I would still have my doubts on wether this was a photo or not!

Can't really say much more there, my ideas fot it have already been brought up :)
(Well, I could say the shrubs/grass near the deck on the right seems to have a strangely straight border with the ground but that would just be nitpicking :P )

So on that, amazing render! :hat: :gj: :clap:
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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

Post by Fletch » Mon Jul 30, 2018 10:47 am

Beautiful render, the darks are a bit dark for my taste, but I understand it's a style you're going for.
Great image! :^:

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Re: Nordic Forest Cottage

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