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posodrac
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Landscape

Post by posodrac » Sat Aug 15, 2020 4:09 pm

Hello to my favorite struggling to learn Twilight Render people - this sounded cocky!!! Well… this is my second exterior render and first usage of proxies. I'm tired of modeling so I let others do the hard work. This is one view shot only, modeled the water and two, very raw, very low poly slopes that you might call it "Terrain". Some trees on the back are floating in the air just to depth purpose (slow computer). The file is almost 3,5Gb it could have more detail but when it takes 25 minutes to open in SU and 4 to load the scene in TLR, those are the signs to make anyone to stop. The original image is 3500x1500 and rendered only with Physical Sky, edit inside TLR.
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This will look good in my "curriculum vitae": "Heterodox truck driver at TNT/FedEx"

ntxdave
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Re: Landscape

Post by ntxdave » Sat Aug 15, 2020 7:25 pm

Some nice detail. Especially the water and boat. :gj:

Mike1158
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Re: Landscape

Post by Mike1158 » Sun Aug 16, 2020 10:17 am

Wonderful. :^: :clap:

tuna57
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Re: Landscape

Post by tuna57 » Sun Aug 16, 2020 6:09 pm

Most excellent , nice and peaceful :clap: :hat:

Fletch
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Re: Landscape

Post by Fletch » Sun Aug 16, 2020 7:03 pm

:shock:
:hat: to Posodrac - great use of environment, water, environment, instances, etc. :clap:

My only suggestion is that the whole image is too sharp and over-saturated on my screen. So a little precisely placed blur and some careful de-saturation in places, (right-click>open image in new tab) some judicious use of added noise might be my approach, obviously it's all up to the taste of the artist. :totgm:

This is my attempt, and here's a link to the photoshop doc if you would like to see what I did. This was processed using Pshop 2020
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posodrac
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Re: Landscape

Post by posodrac » Mon Aug 17, 2020 8:51 pm

Thank you all :hug: . Fletch, I can't download the file, it asks for credentials. It's true about the over-saturated edition, all of my renderings are (I might have exaggerated lowering "Gama"). I also have a less saturated image, but nothing compared to yours, although it looks too dark for a 10:00 AM/4:00 PM side sun. So I took the freedom to light it a little bit (even burning colors of the rocks) and call it "our thing" ;) .
About the sharpness, I have to confess that I've mess up by accidental stop the render at 20 passes, 10 hours, when experimenting the Denoise feature. Denoise is detail destructive at early stages, so I thought I could overcome by using it only with the trees at back , sky and blue water.
So I think this is the one, with your permission :oops: .
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This will look good in my "curriculum vitae": "Heterodox truck driver at TNT/FedEx"

tuna57
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Re: Landscape

Post by tuna57 » Tue Aug 18, 2020 3:25 am

Their all great images... I think the post pro side of things can become an apple or banana kind of thing... which one you find tastiest someone else likes the other one better. Great job either way ! :rspkt:

pbacot
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Re: Landscape

Post by pbacot » Tue Aug 18, 2020 4:09 pm

That's really impressive! Lovely picture.

Fletch
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Re: Landscape

Post by Fletch » Sat Aug 22, 2020 2:14 pm

posodrac wrote: Mon Aug 17, 2020 8:51 pm ...So I took the freedom to light it a little bit ...
So I think this is the one, with your permission...
:^: :hat:
That looks great on my screen, I like it much better. :gj:

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