Falafill

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Blugarero
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Falafill

Post by Blugarero » Thu May 07, 2009 10:02 pm

This is a restaurant that we (@2pp) are working on. The render needs a lot of improvements, but this is where it is so far.

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Re: Falafill

Post by rcossoli » Fri May 08, 2009 2:33 am

is coming
is coming good so far

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Re: Falafill

Post by Fletch » Fri May 08, 2009 3:59 am

awesome to see you cranking on something blu and all!!

can see the segments in the spherical lights...
me personally, I'd go with no people at all than to put shadow people in... just my opinion.

difficult to crit anything else.

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Re: Falafill

Post by rangerrick » Mon May 11, 2009 4:03 pm

Blugarero, I enjoy seeing real world projects that users work on. Please be sure to follow up on this with some updates as you progress. Looking good so far.

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Re: Falafill

Post by Blugarero » Wed May 13, 2009 5:53 am

I decided to go with an exterior shot. This render might only need some minor tweaks. I am thinking of rendering another view from the outside, so that the design in the interior is better exposed.
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Re: Falafill

Post by rangerrick » Wed May 13, 2009 3:18 pm

This is coming along nicely. I think you need some type of illumination on the exterior, moonlight, streetlights, something subtle.

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