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tomyong
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Grandfather clock

Post by tomyong » Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:55 pm

Hi Guys,
This is a test render of some newly made components for another upcoming job :whoot:
As usual C & C are most welcome :P
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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by sshiffermiller » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:59 pm

tomyong wrote:Hi Guys,
This is a test render of some newly made components for another upcoming job :whoot:
As usual C & C are most welcome :P
That is only because you know there isn't much to say! I love the glass on the door of the clock. Thats all I got... :gj:

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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by Ron_Bruins » Wed Apr 06, 2011 5:38 am

I like it very much :gj: it really gives an old antique look.

Although I am not too sure about the glass as it is a bit too scratched.

To me it can be two things:
- either it has a very nice painting look, the glass reflection and the overall touch and feel of the clock look like it is oilpainted on canvas, but then the sidetable doesn't match,as it is too too shiny bright
- or if you want to have the photo realistic look, then I believe the glass shoudl be more shiny and the scratches should be less. Glass being treated that bad would break in my opinion, so it gives more of a plastic feeling. So maybe lower the bump and increase the shinyness

Not sure if it will be better though, just my 2cts :)

Oh and just noticed that the wallpaper pattern is misalligned....
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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by bizmen » Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:43 am

Hi nice work out there. :gj: IMHO, I just noticed the stem of the plant, it seems that it is floating? did you made any post production? or maybe I was only deceived with my 19" old flat monitor.
Also, the wall paper pattern seems very obvious. I don't know if it is advisable to edit the whole vertical stretch pattern in Photoshop or rather to choose a pattern that will not make tiling visible. Its your choice. :D
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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by Fletch » Wed Apr 06, 2011 11:38 am

Nice glass on the clock!
Only main crit: Something seems odd about the bloom of the orchid.
Could the hands on the clock be pushed out a bit?

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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by tomyong » Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:28 pm

Thanks Guys for all comments, :hat:

yes the glass is too scratched ( not intendional at all ) too strongly bumped
floating plant should be due to 2d pic combine with 3d pot compo with face me
and the orchid is a let down :doh: (well it happens) tot they looks good until you render them
Yes Fletch I over look on the clock's hand part too :oops:
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Re: Grandfather clock

Post by dspace » Fri Apr 08, 2011 12:24 am

Nice test. :^:
Dislike the plants and tone mapping. ;)

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