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Architecture office

Post by fymoro » Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:47 pm

Hi all,

Here is a project that I am doing for an Architecture company here in the south France.
This Company only work with oversea client, so they ask me to find a design and a lighting easy especially when they work at night.
I have used the Preset 09 and after 65 passes (1h32) here is the result...

The client is very happy with this so, may be I will keep it like this.

When I use twilight, my computer seems to use all it ram (2gb), With Vray for SU, my computer run at 0.600 ram.

thanks for comments, Fred.
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Re: Architecture office

Post by Ecuadorian » Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:52 pm

The lighting looks well balanced to me.

Why is everyone looking the other way :?:

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Re: Architecture office

Post by fymoro » Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:59 pm

Thanks for your comment.
The 3d people faces are not really nice :roll: , but i will try another view, changing the 3d people position a little bit.

Fred
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Re: Architecture office

Post by fymoro » Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:02 am

ok 4 H rendering....
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Re: Architecture office

Post by Boofredlay » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:00 pm

This looks really nice but the people just do not match. It looks more like a fashion design office with those poses. I would consider different people.
But again, the rendering is very nice.

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Re: Architecture office

Post by Ecuadorian » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:13 pm

Yes, the lighting is far better than anything I have achieved so far. I'm more of an outdoors renderer.
You might want to consider not using people or just using a couple good quality photo cut-outs.

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Re: Architecture office

Post by Fletch » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:15 pm

good lighting, just delete people and you're good to go. Architects know how big people are. ;) (and keyboard and mouse/pad on right draw my eye as strange... if it's about the lighting, I think it's fine)

*edit*
most architects work only on computer these days, this image looks like it's from about 15 years ago... are they really on drawing boards? I have 11 years of professional experience, and really only used a drawing board a few times at work, though I had one beside me every day... I only used it to sketch ideas on trace paper... a few hand renderings. Not much.

If they do use desks, there's a glare spot on them from the lamp, and I would prefer more even lighting from a desk lamp if it were me.

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Re: Architecture office

Post by Elibjr » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:48 pm

The lighting is nice and well distributed. I would take the gamma setting up about a 10th of a point or two. The space seems a little dark even though its night time. And I agree, the people don't fit the space. They make the space appear "cartoony" as opposed to professional. You may want to reference http://www.spine3d.com to see how the big outfits do it. Like Ecuadorian said, I think you are better off with 2d 'face me' cut- outs. Great job.

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Re: Architecture office

Post by fymoro » Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:10 pm

Thanks for your comments, I have just re-render this view without the "Crab" :mrgreen: 3d people.
I have used the 10 preset for 5 hours, changing a bit some texture detail's too and increase the exposure level also.

In fact, I am contractor. I have a small limited company, and I do decorating, refurbishment of residential villas or apartments, office etc... In France it's extremely rare to find a Company able to do 3d, and also the job. (I don't know in the other Country if i's the same thing)
I use Sketchup and rendering with my clients to help them to chose their future design or decoration.
And really, Twilight is perfect for me, because I do not have time to setup parameter, texture etc... like I have done before with Vray, Twilight is more practical.
That's why when I do a 3d, I always keep in mind to do something "workable", because after the 3d I also do the job. ;)
I am not a modeller, but I admire the work of some artist here. :thumb:

Anyway, thanks for your help and all comments are welcome, Cheers to all,

Fred.
http://www.spine3d.com are amazing, thanks Elibjr...
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Re: Architecture office

Post by Mike1158 » Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:34 pm

Very nice, well ballanced to my eye.

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