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jeffh
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Pointers and Opinions needed!!

Post by jeffh » Mon Oct 19, 2015 11:46 pm

Hey folks,
Could you give me some ideas on how I can get a more realistic render?
I'm doing this for a client and they like it but I know it could be better.
Any Ideas?

Thanks
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TSolt
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Re: Pointers and Opinions needed!!

Post by TSolt » Wed Oct 21, 2015 5:42 pm

Nice shot, looks good, I think some of the materials look too flat, the wood and glass framing might look better with alittle bit of shine on them. When I place the ghost people I try to make them a bit transparent. Perhaps make the wood color alittle less saturated. Not sure how these will change the shot but it might help.

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Re: Pointers and Opinions needed!!

Post by Fletch » Wed Oct 21, 2015 6:50 pm

Need better material texture for the tile floor and better mapping and/or wood texture for the wood pieces.
Topaz Denoise 5 or other denoise program will clean up the image really nicely. See attached.

Tone mapping will also help increase intrest - I like Linear Tonemapping an image after it's done rendering, but BEFORE closing the render dialog. I usually start with tonemapping interiors by setting "Dark" level to 1.8 then tweaking up and down from there.
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jeffh
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Re: Pointers and Opinions needed!!

Post by jeffh » Thu Oct 22, 2015 1:47 am

Thanks For the advice guys, I appreciate it.
@Fletch, The touch-up looks good. The program you ran it through smoothed it out and brightened it up. Huge difference between the two.

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Re: Pointers and Opinions needed!!

Post by Fletch » Thu Oct 22, 2015 6:10 pm

I like white silhouette cut-out people. :^:

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