Dolphus' Train
Dolphus' Train
I volunteered to render one of Dolphus' locomotives from his Railway Drawing thread on SCF, because I need the practice. Train depot from the warehouse...C&C welcome
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-Marcus
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Really nice...
I've seen the train models Dolphus have made and they're really detailed...
Adding some dirt, some vegetation and other details will add to the realism to this render...
But I'm sure Dolphus must be pleased with this result...
I've seen the train models Dolphus have made and they're really detailed...
Adding some dirt, some vegetation and other details will add to the realism to this render...
But I'm sure Dolphus must be pleased with this result...
Cheers
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Re: Dolphus' Train
great one!
the colors seem over-saturated to be real (mainly the blue)
the image is a bit dark overall on my screen as well.
try the car glass in the Twilight Material Library>Translucents
if there's nothing in the sky/environment to reflect in the glass, try to position some of the flat tree-leaf planes from the free Twilight components in the resource section here on the forum so that they will reflect in the glass.
I'm jealous... wanted to render one of those myself!d12dozr wrote:C&C welcome
the colors seem over-saturated to be real (mainly the blue)
the image is a bit dark overall on my screen as well.
try the car glass in the Twilight Material Library>Translucents
if there's nothing in the sky/environment to reflect in the glass, try to position some of the flat tree-leaf planes from the free Twilight components in the resource section here on the forum so that they will reflect in the glass.
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I have to agree with Fletch...Fletch wrote:the colors seem over-saturated to be real (mainly the blue)
the image is a bit dark overall on my screen as well.
Just gave it a quick swirl in Adobe Lightroom, where I adjusted the white balance and tone... (hope you don't mind...!? )
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Cheers
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Re: Dolphus' Train
you are missing brick arches over windows....
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looking much better already!
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Thanks Frederick, that is better...I suck at Photoshop so can you tell me exactly what you did?
Fletch, thanks for the ideas...I tried to fix the blue in PS afterward, maybe I should just do it in Sketchup before rendering I'll try again and post when I'm done PS. all I did was ask Dolphus for the model, I'm sure he'd send it to you too!
Star - you are 100% right...maybe next time
Thanks for all the comments!
Fletch, thanks for the ideas...I tried to fix the blue in PS afterward, maybe I should just do it in Sketchup before rendering I'll try again and post when I'm done PS. all I did was ask Dolphus for the model, I'm sure he'd send it to you too!
Star - you are 100% right...maybe next time
Thanks for all the comments!
-Marcus
Re: Dolphus' Train
some may disagree with me... but I usually, with very saturated colors, have good luck dragging the saturation slider to about 80-85. A quick tiny prelim render will tell you.
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You're very welcome...d12dozr wrote:Thanks Frederick, that is better...
Like you, I'm not very good with PS either...d12dozr wrote:I suck at Photoshop...
Like I wrote, I used Adobe Lightroom, which is a standalone application...d12dozr wrote:...so can you tell me exactly what you did?
You can download the demoversion and try it yourself...
For this particular image, all I did was auto adjusting the white balance and tone in the "Development" tab...
Cheers
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
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