Test render again

[tomyong]

Hi Guys,
another quick test render of some furniture pcs for another
job .As usual C & C are welcome

[paappleb]

Awesome job as usual tom. I do see a few things that pop out at me that could use a little tweaking. Many of the thin decorative curved elements of the foot board of the bed are rather blocky. That's the only large thing I see. I may suggest uping the shininess of the M&M poster a bit since it would have a laminate or gloss finish and to turn down the monitor a bit. Looking at how high the monitor is tilted makes my neck hurt.

[NVizeon]

I would increase the contrast in the image it seems a bit flat to me. I would also add a wall base where the wall meets the floor again adds a bit of realizm to the space. I love the desk/shelf combo

[Fletch]

that's a sweet desk/book case.

the arcs on the curves on the bed are very segmented.

otherwise looking great!

[sshiffermiller]

Looks good. What is the edging on the shelfdesk representing? Melamine? I think it might look good with a dark or even black edge. Almost like a representation of a section cut. Also It would create a definite contrast with the wall in back... So if this rendering is about the desk, then that would do it I think.

[tomyong]

Thanks Guys for all the pointers and input.
I know, I know, ( GUILTY ) the bed is segmented it is done a while ago for FF ( low poly ) and it looks like the bed
the young lady is having so--- ( LAZY )

sshiffermiller- yes it will be melamine anyway we are still in discussion with client and carpenter re
the configaration and method of construction

[tomyong]

attach another render with some small changes and longer cooking time
that earlier chair used is actually for the dining area

[NVizeon]

much better now. I think that's a day bed if I'm not mistaken though. a girly bed would be more appropriate. Great job with the rendering .