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bravoddb
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My first post

Post by bravoddb » Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:53 am

This is my first post, but not my first renderings, they are from a very simple model.
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Ecuadorian
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Re: My first post

Post by Ecuadorian » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:13 am

They're both really good, especially the second one.

bravoddb
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Re: My first post

Post by bravoddb » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:57 am

Thanks Ecuadorian, I really like them, but they are mine, but what can I say?. So I prefer to hear from you guys, and learn from what you guys say.

Here is a third one.
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Fletch
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Re: My first post

Post by Fletch » Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:39 am

very good, bravoddb! :welcome:
if you are looking for a place to improve it, the floor material is repeating noticeably. :)
the glow looks nice, but is perhaps a little bit too powerful and distracting sometimes.

do you have a powerful light outside the window shining in? if so, no need to do this, if you are rendering with progressive methods, just use the Sky Portal. There's a section in the manual, and a good post here (look for "Sky Portal") where you can download an additional sky portal for seeing outside as well.

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Re: My first post

Post by olishea » Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:34 pm

very nice, but bloom/diffuse glow is too much in last image. looks like a dream!!

not seen a black board in a few years!!

good stuff. maybe a few children in the images would add more life and movement.
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Re: My first post

Post by majid » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:01 pm

:welcome: and nice renders :^:

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