Shop again !!

[fymoro]

Hi All,

I know what you gone a say "he is sleeping with his computer or what ?" And it's nearly true...
I have a lot of demand, and I know that Twilight is an important factor for this situation...

Modeling yesterday afternoon, rendered in 8hours interior + preset last night,

Comment are welcome...

[Fletch]

you're design?! really like it! tres bien!
you have become deadly with Twilight!

[fymoro]

Thanks Fletch, Yes My design... The combination SU and Twilight...

[olishea]

Fred: I replied to this over at SCF:

http://forums.sketchucation.com/viewtop ... 96#p235496

no need to repeat myself, here is brighter vertical version with clothes!

[shura]

Bravo Fred! I Think that ceiling is wicked! Yes, Scott and Michali over at SCF are right that a shop would feel even a little more brighter, but as long as the products are picked out well, it is a matter of what athmosphere u r prefering imho. I was looking at your "Fashion" shop design a lot, wondering how the lighting is so well adjusted. Guess it is the downlights (and your experience of course).
What I also see in your design is a lot of detail already - my intuition just said that I would prefer seeing it clean and all free from people and products. But if you are going for the realism that comes with the entourage, I would have both people and clothes either photorealistic or symbolic/abstract...
...Just my 2 cents.
cheers
alex

[Chris]

Wow, very impressive!

[fymoro]

Well well well, Thanks for your honest comments,

I have to explain a bit more the project and why I have done this kind of render image.

It is not really a shop, but more a cloth Show room and The concept is:
- You choose the model you like, and they make a unique model for you...(very expensive around Usd 5000 for one cloth... ), It's normal for Monaco...

It's a very very famous brand, the cloth that they sell are very sophisticated and very hard to model in Sketchup...(for me... ), and I must go quickly to don't loose the job...

That is why, I will not add any stocks, and I prefer show to the client the organization inside the "shop", The lighting, the design...

I am agree that is a bit to dark, so I add a neon light all around the ceiling beams, And I have also changes the point of view of the perspective (More real.

Yesterday I sent them the first render a bit more "lighty", and they have appreciated, today I will send them this image, What do you think ?

Thanks for your honest comments, And Oliver, how have you made the stars Ray around the spotlight, It's awesome... :

[Fletch]

much better pt of view,
looks professional!

[olishea]

so much better!!

[dutchesse]

yes,yes, mucho better point of view ... :0)
only one comment: I have a feeling that when you make the people a bit grey-ish and transparent, the room will really come to life. At the moment the people apear almost like paper cutouts compared to the realism of the room.
Just a though :0)

Dutchesse