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Terrace
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:47 am
by rcossoli
Finally I could finish a outside scene
This rendered an hour with the exterior daytime method, the original size is 1600x700, the magen leave them in original size so they can see it better.
Re: Terrace
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 4:24 am
by Chris
Fantastic!
The foreground wood steps (hot tub?) seem too sharp, crisp to me. Not sure if it's the texture or if it could just use a touch of DOF..., but I really really enjoy the light and shadow here.
Re: Terrace
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 8:57 am
by Fletch
love the sun light!
the material for the metal canopy/sunshade could use some bump/irregularity... and the design of it seems very fat/heavy.
agree w/ Chris about the steps in wood.
the furniture could use some more detail (cushions on lounge seem too flat)
Re: Terrace
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:23 am
by rcossoli
Thank you
The truth in this case the design is not mine, is part of an apartment building designed elements studio where I work, So take a moment to render.
So there are things that quedarond and thus, for example metal canopy.
But as with the previous image, taking into account the different views will improve the scene.
