Hi guys,
Just testing some bath shots. What you think?
Testing some bath interiors.
Testing some bath interiors.
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Re: Testing some bath interiors.
So chic toilets
Re: Testing some bath interiors.
Let me start with what I find good in these renders...
I like the camera angles you've used...
I like the lightning of the scenes...
And then to the crits...
The textures and materials need some "love" and attention...!
The stone wall in the first image seem flat, have you applied a bump map in order to try and improve the visual effect...??
The wooden floor materials all seem too shiny and I don't know what to say about the strange stone "thing" under the stair...
I can recommend that you add many details to enhance these renders...
I.e. a rail for the stairs, some towels and other things you normally would see in a bathroom...
The model has a lot of potential and I look forward to see the progress with these...
I like the camera angles you've used...
I like the lightning of the scenes...
And then to the crits...
The textures and materials need some "love" and attention...!
The stone wall in the first image seem flat, have you applied a bump map in order to try and improve the visual effect...??
The wooden floor materials all seem too shiny and I don't know what to say about the strange stone "thing" under the stair...
I can recommend that you add many details to enhance these renders...
I.e. a rail for the stairs, some towels and other things you normally would see in a bathroom...
The model has a lot of potential and I look forward to see the progress with these...
Cheers
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Kim Frederik
Twilight Render Support
“…Life is drawing without an eraser...”
Re: Testing some bath interiors.
Thankyou very much for all your comments, this are the first tests that I'm doing, maybe tonight I'll be uploading the new ones with some improvements and taking care about your crits.Frederik wrote:Let me start with what I find good in these renders...
I like the camera angles you've used...
I like the lightning of the scenes...
And then to the crits...
The textures and materials need some "love" and attention...!
The stone wall in the first image seem flat, have you applied a bump map in order to try and improve the visual effect...??
The wooden floor materials all seem too shiny and I don't know what to say about the strange stone "thing" under the stair...
I can recommend that you add many details to enhance these renders...
I.e. a rail for the stairs, some towels and other things you normally would see in a bathroom...
The model has a lot of potential and I look forward to see the progress with these...
Cheers
Jaime
Monterrey, Mexico
Re: Testing some bath interiors.
Jaime,
be sure to apply a material template such as plastic or paint if you want bump to show up. at very least you must change the number of IOR from 1.0 (air) to 1.01 or greater for bumps to be seen. Air can't be bumpy.
very good start! the shower door looks really great.
be sure to apply a material template such as plastic or paint if you want bump to show up. at very least you must change the number of IOR from 1.0 (air) to 1.01 or greater for bumps to be seen. Air can't be bumpy.
very good start! the shower door looks really great.
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